Talk is cheap. Write.
I’ve said some pretty strong stuff on the recent
Mars Ravelo’s Darna release, generally that I was disappointed that it didn’t do anything new. So, just WHAT constitutes new, or updated to me? Am I just ranting and blowing off words but not having anything to give constructively? Well, far be it for me to be like a crappy expat I once met who could do nothing but shoot down things without giving things back. If I had the reins and the moolah...
How would I have done Darna? Here’s my take.
If I could, I’d draw
Darna myself, perhaps though slightly more serious than the style I use in my own comic,
Angel Ace. Not too manga-ish, but it would be recognizable as my style. I want expressive faces, facial expressions and impishness.
Now, who would our protagonist be? How would the story open? What would be the enemy she’d face?
First of all, my
Narda wouldn’t be uber-gorgeous. At least, not right away. She’ll be reasonably attractive, but understated. She’s more brains than looks, punctuated by her conservative attire. She wouldn’t stand out from her barkada of pretty girls. In fact, I would go to great lengths to have her best friend be a GORGEOUS Krush ng Bayan girl, who other people would think is actually Darna out of costume. Narda’s smart, she’s not very sociable and a bit of a loner; but this conceals a good heart that is always looking out for her more frivolous friends, and someone who has some funny quirks; perhaps she loves reading comics. Perhaps she likes sappy ballads. She’s a romantic and a dreamer. There’s a guy who likes her, but on a curve note, he seems to be fixated on finding out who Darna is, and Narda is the LAST person he would suspect. He'd try to help out and generally be like a sidekick (perhaps like a more helpful Ron Stoppable to Darna's Kim). Oh, and I’d name the guy
Ding. Heh.
Anyway, Narda inherited the magical stone from her grandma. She was told the secret when she became a young woman at 13, and ever since she has been using the power to avert crisis and catastrophe, stopping supernatural menaces and threats to the people. In between all that, she has to go through college and live in a dorm with some ecclectic characters; her whistlebait best friend, a hippie girl and perhaps a goth girl. Kinda like
MTV’s Real World. Heh.
The enemy I guess should be
Valentina, or a descendant of the original. Valentina may be the daughter or offspring/clone of the earlier villain defeated by Narda’s grandmother. The rivalry lives on.
Anyway, Valentina will have her organization (Cobra!!!) or cult that follows her and worships her as a goddess. Have faceless snake-themed minions, and of course an elite cabal of higher-ups to directly serve the Big V. Their goal is world domination of course.
Since political, entertainment and religious quarters have already been used as a vehicle for the snaky villainess, let’s try something different.
How about Cyberspace?
Recently, a wave of powerful and deadly viruses called
snakes (more powerful than worms) are infesting hard drives, and manifesting a hypnotic screensaver that is causing youths to perpetrate crimes in Valentina’s name. Who is doing this? Where is the Snake coming from? Is Valentina really behind it?
Aside from having a younger incarnation of Valentina, she will have her followers protect her hacker ally and search for Darna.
Fighting should be dynamic, taking cues from manga (get from the best). There should be hard hitting battles and fights, instead of one-panel punches and splash pages. Darna will have strength, flight and fighting skill, plus probably the power to heal or repel evil. She should be aware of her enemy, and vice-versa… this is a war of wits as well as fists.
The stakes get higher as the crimes of the mesmerized youths begin to escalate. Narda will have to find out how to trace the source, eventually perhaps trying to infiltrate the Snake cult. Will she be able to do so without falling herself under Valentina’s spell? In the end it will be Narda’s personality, her grounded self, which will allow her to resist, and that’s why SHE’S Darna in the first place.
But what if her friends get involved as well? The climax or a major battle will be a rave where Valentina herself will manifest from the screens (Shades of Sadako) and incite a wave of violence throughout the city… unless Darna somehow manages to save the day.
Rough, top-of-mind, spur of the moment. That’s how I’d do Darna. Is it necessarily better than the released comic? Maybe, maybe not. Just wanted to show that I can give out as well as I give in. Or something like that. Whatever. Moving on...